Wednesday, May 23, 2012

The last of the Embers

This Flesh
you, O Novice,
just Seared
was already
from last night's horror.
Pray tell, what you shall do
when I am but
a handful of ash?


Sheilagh Lee said...

well done

Abhyudaya Shrivastava said...

I suggest the novice to try and avoid crossing paths with you tomorrow.

Archna Sharma said...

We sometimes neglect to realize with our whole hearts when there is little left to gather and hold.

Lovely and welcome.


beautifully expressed

jaerose said...

I like the style of this poem..the story written as a question..Jae

Shilpa Nair said...

@Sheilagh, Abhyudaya, Archna, Rahul and jaerose - Thank You for your kind comments. I apologize I have been away from 'cyber-world' lately, and hence could not ack your comments earlier.

The Fool said...

Nice poetry in you usual poignant style. And I remember you commenting once that you do not understand poetry.

Shilpa Nair said...

@TF - Thanks :) Yes, I think I hated peotry because it was bound by 'rules', you know sonnets-bonnets-hornets blah, blah. I am more comfortable with freestyle.