Sunday, May 01, 2011

Defeat

This cloud of your Love,
Your so called Passion
Suffocates me.
Gags me.
I want to pierce 
this Mouldy lid
this Fungus shell around me.
But time and again,
I am taken in by
your Lies.
Your False Promises.
Everytime I gather the strength to break free,
you Defeat me
with Saccharine.

10 comments:

VIKRAM KARVE said...

Hi Shilpa,
Very powerful words - just blew me away.
Keep Writing and unleash your inner emotions into creativity.
Glad I came across your blog.
Regards
Vikram

Purba said...

When you know it's suffocating, why prolong the agony?

Shilpa Nair said...

Thank U, Vikram. It is a pleasure to have a 'big' writer like u, review my blog. Appreciating it.

Shilpa Nair said...

@Purba - :( If this had happened to me, I would definitely have asked the guy to get lost :) Unfortunately it is just a figment of my imagination.

the critics said...

The figment of your imagination . . is glowing like a lightned filament though and has spread some definite hue around:-). .

Rachit said...

it tears me apart to look inside what's the feeling of defeat when success is yours. A lovely post. :)

Shilpa Nair said...

@ TC - Nonsense :) :) :) Hahahaha..

@ Rachit - Thaaankuuuu :)

Jyoti Sharma said...

WOW..thank you for writing this..n congrats for winning..:D

JPS said...

good....

JPS said...

good..